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Love- Defined

Blossom in your eyes
A refreshing sight
Exciting the birth of life.
Youthful ever glow.

Impulsing rhythm
Flowing freely through
The songs of spring
That you hum in your sleep.

Lips of petals
Spread in a smile
Illuminating the
Very darkness winter
Submerged us in.

This feeling you show
In every move or word
In exact reflection
Of my own.

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  • Manda-Lou
    February 7, 2007

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    Very pretty. Well done write and intriguing. I really like this; you've done something beautiful! Excellent. Thanks for entering and Good luck!