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Can't

I can’t even look at her anymore
I can’t smile without thinking about her
I can’t think about anything anymore but her

When I think about her all I can do is smile
When I talk to her all I do is grin
When I hug her I never want to let go

It’s amazing how I she makes me feel
Yet I know that I will never be able to
Call her my own

I want a family just like she does
Yet I want to adopt a little kid
Instead of having one myself

She brings a spark of happiness
If only for a minute
To my lonely heart which is black

I love her if you can’t tell
But I know her love for me
Isn’t as strong as mine

Her name isn’t important
And neither are her looks
All that matters is that she makes me happy

Her eyes are like a water fall
Or a raging river
But always shows love and care

Her body is beautiful
Even if she doesn’t believe me
But I would do anything not to let go of it

Her smile would cheer up
Even the grumpiest person
Even just for 5 minutes

Her voice melts my heart
Every time I hear it all I want to do
Is kiss you there and then

Your lips as soft as rose petals
And as gentle as a butterfly
Yet still as rough 

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  • jstrauch
    February 18, 2007

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    hmm... lol thought id pull a you and just leave hmm but i cant because i was wonderin who this is to?


  • Melodies gold member
    February 9, 2007

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    A warm and loving poem that melts my heart!

    Ah, Flic, your poetry always makes me wish I could hug you for reals! You are the best-est poet girl and you have such a sweet way of telling how you feel. You're the little sis that I wish I could have had
    and you are so far away, yet, so CLOSE! You just keep smiling and trying your best and you will get the good things of life you deserve.


  • ELmo LuVZu 4eVA
    February 9, 2007

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    wow hunny this is good i like it heaps well keep up tha rites plz n ill cya round hey well mwa xox