I thought we had it all
My dreams finally coming true
The girl of my dreams loved me
But now I'm sad and blue
I finally believed
Life was going my way
And then it happened
That faithful stormy day
I came home early
With flowers in my hand
Just to find you lying
In bed with another man
You left me
Chorus:
I heard my heart break
When I saw you with him
Shards of my heart
Destroying me from within
Now I'm all alone
Left broken inside
On that faithful day
When you said goodbye
I can't forget you
No matter how hard I try
Every time I think of you
I have to stop and cry
You were my destiny
The love of my life
You meant the world to me
My beautiful wife
We were going to
Build a family
And live forever
Together happily
Then you left me
Chorus:
I heard my heart break
When I saw you with him
Shards of my heart
Destroying me from within
Now I'm all alone
Left broken inside
On that faithful day
When you said goodbye
What do I do
Now that I'm alone
Losing my true love
Losing my happy home
Chorus:
I heard my heart break
When I saw you with him
Shards of my heart
Destroying me from within
Now I'm all alone
Left broken inside
On that faithful day
When you said goodbye
On that faithful day
When you said goodbye
A contest entry
- Write Me A Country Song by TheseAreMyWords.
300 points, ended February 11, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Song/Lyric Writer's Contest by Acronym.
850 points, ended March 9, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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There are tears in my eyes, and a sadness in my heart for you. Very sadly bt beautifully written.
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Im glad you felt the emotions in this it was meant to be as such
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wow that is so beautiful... i was singing it as i went.... i cant believe how talented you really are. i love this and loving country myself i could pic this being sung too
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Thank you before I started writing poetry I wrote lyrics so this was me dipping into my past thank you for your kind words
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