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Lovestruck

 



Hope flipped freely in wishing well

for eye opening realizations

of obvious attraction shared.

 

Two hearts suffer in separation

as blindfold of fear hinders clarity.

 

Fate plays out; destiny takes hold.

Cupid's arrow hits target, dead center;

love arrives on winged wishes granted.

 

 

Happily ever after awarded

to patience and virtue.


 

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    February 1, 2008

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    It really sucks when two people care for each other and want to be close so badly, yet miles between them. Very heartfelt and beautiful


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    February 7, 2007

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    This is beautiful, love is such a mystifying condition, you have cpatured it with great emotion and clarity... well done on a great write and thankyou for entering this contest

    Karen


  • Blazing White Wolf
    February 7, 2007

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    lovely little rendition of that magical enerrgy that takes place when two are for no other reason then they are, attracted to each oher in ways deeper then thought alove welll done My lioness

    love,
    Master