Two dreams one night- Part I
God, in my dream, I brushed your dark thick hair
as I pulled through it shea butter there.
I read poetry to your face asleep.
going to kitchen to fry spinach steeped
with tea oil and round Moroccan bread
whispering to your sleeping ears I said.
"Sunshine awake and taste fried greens on fork.
I guarantee though spicy there's no pork."
Sleepy, your mouth opened wolfing it down
as I wiped your face removing your gown.
I spread your legs wiping some moisture there
as you moaned baby yes, forgetting cares.
I saw vagina lotus turn over
exposing dream clitoris and vulva.
Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari
Two dreams one night- Part II
Lord, I dreamed my wash cloth rub your clit light.
You moaned loudly proving sleep lost its fight.
Then I put two fingers into vagina
releasing hot clam smells like cantinas.
Then you pulled my head into your thatch nest
screaming out my name orgasming best
twice times thrice uterus ballooned inside
falling your back arched rippling passion's tide.
I took my warm clothe and washed you all clean
of sweaty liquids glistening pools seen
and with my towel dried you totally
brushing and braiding mussed hair gingerly.
You fell asleep quietly in my lap
and in dream lay with me taking a nap.
Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari
Author notes
Dear readers
What if there were two erotic dreams seperate but connected and then they got transposed into sonnets. Can dreams constitute a Valentine? Perhaps just perhaps.
Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari
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excellent
I could really visualize the dreams of ecstacy. Great job.
I really like the part when you said "You moaned loudly proving sleep lost its fight." It nothing like waking up to sweet satisfaction. -
interesting. good writing though, interesting.
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Oh my!
This is quite some poem you have written here. I don't think that I was expecting it to be erotic when I clicked on it so I was really surprised. lol I thought that some of the way that you said things sounded funny but I also thought that it sounded really interesting that way too. You did a good job of expressing yourself. 
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good writing
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Interesting 'adult' poetry from the middle east.
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Intoxicating!
Sensually enchanting and passionate!
The imagery was fantastic! All my senses
were utilized in this erotically written
masterpiece. Your words painted a vision
of exotic bliss wrapped in sweet ecstasy!
Brilliant! Bravo! Great work! -
Ah and someday dreams come true. I hope so. So romantic it was and your lady is going to remain in this velvet dream.
Such true feelings are over your words. May your love remain strong.
~Massy~
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you all
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Very Erotic Collaboration
done well, Its as if you both share your karma. Beautiful picutres of love and lust. Think am having a hot flash!....well done prose...novy
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Give me a break.
Darling lovers
OK, he brushes hair
whispers poetry, feeds you
seduces you with care
and cradles you too.
You guys are rocking
soft and hard together
he unrolls your stockings
and teases passion's teather.
Smoosh and oosh before I whoosh
Janet -
A valentine you have,
but a love is what you crave,
If she ever gets to finish this,
There's no way she will behave!
Lol I am viewing a new side to your unending talent!
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Oh...
But dear sister...
I have no choice but to behave...
for in these dreams...
I am his love slave...
you see...these are OUR dreams...
not just the dreams of one.
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