Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

blink

blink
persian cat
paper rose
stone black skin
pearly toes
blink
rocky past
and stagnant future
never shall I see thee shake or shiver
blink

Author notes

I decided what I feel is a different direction on this.

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Quiet places
    February 7, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    Very well penned! Interesting direction you took here. Good luck, Don