wouldn't it be great
if you had the appetite
to order in a man
like a pizza
& asked for the hawaiin
topped with pineapple
& ate him in bed
with relish
now that's what I call
a snack attack!
A contest entry
- 10 lines - 10 minutes - 2 by Melissa Gayle.
300 points, ended February 6, 2007, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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LMAO I aways envisioned them like a video library, you know pick out what you like and if its no good take it back and get another, but everyone would want the overnight new releases lol weekly's would be left on the shelf! Loved this. lol
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haha this was cute I loved it. I can just see eating my fiance as a snack Great write Thank you or sharing this with us and great job on silve.
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This is really nice. There was a lot said in a few little words. It did leave the reader wanting more. Nicely penned. Congrats on your silver.
Love always,
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WOW!!!! So much said in so few words. Left me wanting more. LOL. Great write. Well done. Keep them coming and blessed be.
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LMAO
What, and no italian or polish sausage??? Me thinks someone has a great big appetite - do you think you could eat the whole thing? And what size would you order - small, medium or large - gosh you wouldnt order extra large as in party size would you? Well if you do invite me over - feeling a tad hungry myself
This had me *giggling*
loved it,
galfalfa
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Excellent
This is brilliat, but i think you should wait for one of those special deals were you get two for one. congrates on the silver all the best Brian.
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This made me giggle. I liked the idea you conveyed, it was something that made me smile, which is something rare these days. Ordering a man much like a pizza...what a great idea! And the way you wrote about it and didn't elaborate too much upon it left room for much imagination. You earned that trophy with this one! Great write!
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LOLOL!! cute message and makes me wanna eat now. Dang! Never looked at it from this stand point. Good phrasing and on capturing ur audience w/ a different approach! Looking forward 2 reading more from u! -theQueen"
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WOO HOO would life be wonderful then? Could you order cake so you could eat it too? I love the twist on snacking here
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hahahaha thats just freaking hilarious. wow. hahha i loved it, i like ur poems u are realy good and comming up with great stuff. nice style
peaceee -
congrats on your silver hun... but I think it was gold!
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lmao - I love it!
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hmmmm I think I'd like that.... I knew not to enter this contest.... I admit defeat here and now LMAO tis gold for you for sure!!
Karen
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jaw dropping hot write- mmm, very lovely thought
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