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Classical Rendition




Fingers strum olive tones

with intense precision,

like Beethoven tickles

the ivory in his fifth symphony.


 

Melodious sighs released

in soprano notes

from a fevered entwinement.


 

Joined in a duet,

Love's orchestra plays

a classical rendition of desires fulfilled.



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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    February 1, 2008

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    You really have a knack for the sensual/love pieces. I don't think I have this sort of passion when I write them myself. Another excellent piece.


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    February 7, 2007

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    Most beautifully done! Sensual, loving; just altogether a wonderfully crafted piece! You go, girl! I loved this! It's awesome!

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    February 6, 2007

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    Beautiful. Most of the pieces I have read of yours always seem to have this wonderfully serene feel to it, no matter the emotion penned. I hope that makes sense.


  • B Chandler
    February 6, 2007

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    olvie ????

    Dont you mean olive From my grasp of this write Bel I can tell easily that this can be intepreted in two different ways.

    The first being of two people in long awaitment of love--that no matter what transpired between them in the past, it's all behind them leaving only that movement lovers know all too well. The second interpretation can signify the jointment of a tranquility while one is lost in the momemtum of the music- feeling everry sensation of the notes to the end where still in the mind one is still able to listen to that music. Keep penning moonie


  • Blazing White Wolf
    February 6, 2007

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    nice and sensual his fifth symphony hmmmmmm i'll hif fourth nicely done and good luck My lioness

    love,
    Michael

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