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My Secret (Not a Poem)

I want nothing more than to die in this moment because if I were to die, then I'd be with the ones I love and miss most.

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  • Dead Star--x
    February 14, 2007

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    i so agree, with you on that. but if we ended our lives now theyd be pissed because if they love you they want you to live life.. thanx for entering good luck!!!
    *Abused *


  • XXBrunettexBarbieXX
    February 13, 2007
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    this is such a sad write and it hurts when the ones we love are taken from us and we miss them..this was full of pain and sadness i can relate..your very talented keep writting and stay strong

    ~Chrissy~


  • DancingRed
    February 9, 2007

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    Thanks for sharing this short and powerful secret with us all, I know how hard it can be to share a secret like this. Good luck in the contest.

    DancingRed.


  • army2005
    February 7, 2007

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    Why dont you stand ground and show they that you still love them and that you are able to dedicate your life to them. Life is much more then that.


    • babygirltmple619
      February 7, 2007
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      they're dead. as in not living. as in, i want to die so i can be with them. that's what the whole sentence says.

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