We went up there
all set to rock-
a pedastal for our Colossus.
We came down from there
feeling greatly satisfied
we'd held the world in the palm of our hand
and a career was made and broken in a moment...
A contest entry
- Poetry in 15 Minutes. by DancingRed.
370 points, ended February 9, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Ambiguous, mysterious and beautiful. I think this piece could be about love - although perhaps anyone who reads it could make it seem personal of their own experiences. I love the last two lines.
Thank you for entering this in my contest.
DancingRed.
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actually, I intended it to be a one-hit wonder band, but take it however you please
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