I felt
A little bit
Wronged
But hurting you
Made me feel
A little bit
Right
But even after hurting you
I still sit here and cry
As you fuck her all night
She screams your name
And I fall apart
You tell me I should die my hair blonde
The color of hers
You tell me I should fall apart
I felt
A little bit
Elated
When I saw her dead
With my barbed wired heart
Hung around her neck
It digs in
And makes her bleed
Even in death
She is ugly
And I enjoy her misery
Author notes
sorry i went a little insane...
A contest entry
- Dark Love by loveaswellashate.
393 points, ended February 20, 2007, 13 entries
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Comments
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Wow, this is an amazing poem. I love it. Insane is good... *twiddles fingers*..hehe. Great Job!
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I...I...I have nothin' ta say. WOW!?! You did a very good job on this one. I bow down.
Unfaithfully Your's
Of Blood and Tears
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Insane good
dont be sorry... insane is GOOD... lol.. great job.. I liked this...
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Wow
That was hard hitting and well emotioned. That last couple stanza's really spoke volumes.
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