Kiss me
then kill me.
Love me
then leave.
Medicate
then
tear out these tubes.
Palpitations flutter
and
flat-line ...
Butterfly book.
Squeezed
between pages.
Caterpillar cemetery
cast
in concrete.
Boots drag heel.
Drone clone.
Assimilate.
Unloved.
A contest entry
- Dark Love by loveaswellashate.
393 points, ended February 20, 2007, 13 entries
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"palpitations flutter then flat line" your imagery is, just, wow. very good read
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Love, love, love "caterpillar cemetery" - good luck in contest!
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jesus, this is excellent too, the imagery is amazing, (caterpillar cemetery cast in concrete)!you continue to impress mr sheltered,
well done and good luck in the contest,
floorboards.
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amazing. i loved it, thanx for commenting my shitty poem...lol
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Well, what can I say? ....Good shit.
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hahaha perhaps it was i reread it and quite like it now
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I really like this.. i love the way you wrote this.. thanx for joinin the contest...
Laters
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Aww ...Shucks
So ...The way to a girls heart is by plunging a knife into her Aorta. Who'd a thought Hehehe. Thanks.
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