Watching
Always alone
To conceal my secret
Mystery surrounds my purpose
Colorfully hiding here in plain view
Behind each petal you will see
A pixie such as me
Painting colors
Watching
Author notes
Rictameter- A nine-line poem. Its pattern of syllables per line goes 2, 4, 6, 8, 10, 8, 6, 4, 2. Also, the first and last lines must be the same.
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Very vivid and filled with imagery. Intest and excellent. Thanks for entering Prewrites, I wish you good luck, the best luck!~
~Ryan~ -
Lovely form you used here - rictameters look so nice when written correctly. Liked the flow of this one - lovely pennning you have done here - good flow as well.
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very well written great job
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Powerful!
This poem was filled with color
fluid imagery and mystery.
The dimensions of this poem
gave it depth and strength.
Very well written -
BEAUTIFUL!
Very lovely words indeed.
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Love this wrtie! It magical touch is like a dream.
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LOVED IT
Very well done in a great form, of course!! very touching sweet write to be certain! ONe of my favorite sayings:
Colorfully hiding here in plain view
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Awesome!!
Wow! I loved this poem and the picture and background were terrific!! Your very talented I am in awe at your work!! I hope to reach this level sometime.. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful read!!
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So short and sweet. The color purple adds to your poem and I like how you compare yourself to a pixie. Keep penning and sharing your talent.
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Very good. I could see the pixie hiding in plain view. Enjoyed this.
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This was very nice..Not too familiar with this form.
Good Luck in the contest
Soulful Woman -
Very beautiful and well written. I like the image of a petal "hiding in plain view" behind other petals. Very cute.
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Please do it quick as I will have to sort your poem out quick as I have other poems to read
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Please could you make your writing a lot smaller and put your writing in the center, just go to edit, then it will be accepted. thank you.
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