Mary had a little lamb,
you’ve heard this one before.
But did you know she passed her plate,
and asked for a little more?
A contest entry
- Give me some weird poems! by TwiztidMaggot.
345 points, ended June 25, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I need a laugh by Sarah957.
300 points, ended March 24, 2008, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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LOL it took me a second to get that one, then a big grin crossed my face.
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Hehe very amusing. I love it! All the best in the contest with it
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This is a very funny alternate ending to that famous nursery rhyme. Unfortunately, it doesn't fit the requirements of my contest. I'm only allowing certain forms to enter, so I'll have to remove this one. Please feel more than welcome to enter another, though.
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wow!
this had me chuckling. It is nice to make an innocent character rather sinister and evil.
I like this poem for it is funny and has a rhyme to it. Congrats on the HM! brilliant! best of wishes in the contest!
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haha wooow. i love how short and sweet it was, yet it got the point across. that was cool. i have NEVER thought of it that way until i read this..haha
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lol. this is funny. I really needed a laugh. good job... not really exactly what I'm looking for but... oh well... lol. good job!
Crimson -
Damn, that was funny! About busted a gut on this one! I think hurt myself. Ow. I'll take seconds too!
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The Black Flame
Short, simple yet straight to the point and VERY funny
Keep it up
Stay safe
~Amanda
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RLMFAO!
hahahahahhaha!!!!!!!! that's CLEVER! nuff' said.
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Short and Bitterly Sweet
Haha, cute. Clever. Loveable. Good write.
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