I was never real until I met you,
I was wandering aimlessly with nothing to do
When first I looked into your sea green eyes
I thought all you would do was lead me to my demise
How was I to know how much I would care
The first time I saw you standing there
The day you asked for a kiss
I never could've dreamed of this
The first time we ever crossed that line
I could never imagine you always being mine
And when I realized you'd stolen my heart
I could only hope we'd never be apart
And here we are ten years later
I don't believe my love for you has ever been greater
A contest entry
- Hugs and Kisses from Me.. by Manda-Lou.
625 points, ended February 17, 2007, 16 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrite Contest! (Show me your stuff) by BloodCrusted.
600 points, ended April 18, 2007, 97 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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hmm...this is one of those happy-ending stories^^
i can certainly feel the emotoin in this write
good job, good luck in the contest, and KEEP IT FLOWING!
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Haha, I agree.
It made me feel all warm and fuzzy, and loveable inside.
You portrayed the feeling that we all feel one time or another. And you wrote it soo... fuzzily! lol
Nice write!
-System of Cyanide
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Aw that's so sweet! I got giddy with the line, "The day you asked for a kiss". Lol I really don't quite know why but I did! Made me feel fuzzy inside. Well done! Love this. Thanks for entering and Good luck!
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