With stain glass eyes you glance at me,
Words being spoken soundlessly.
from me to you, of things not said,
these words resounding within my head.
Every hug, and touch so brief,
I cling to to be hit with grief,
because I wish upon every star,
that you would stay within my heart.
You I trust, which I don't often do,
it shows how strong I feel for you.
I wish you would see your love struck friend,
who wishes you would love her back in the end.
But you don't look, so you don't see me,
Or the ghost of what I used to be...
Yet here I am, still here for you,
because I know, no girl loves you like I do...
A contest entry
- Hugs and Kisses from Me.. by Manda-Lou.
625 points, ended February 17, 2007, 16 entries
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this is realy nice i love the rhyme scheme also.its lovely
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I love your poetry! It's really great and everything! I wish I could be that good!
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Oh, this is beautiful. Your rhyme flows nicecly and isn't forced. This is a really awesome write. Excellent. Well, thank you for entering and good luck!
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