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"Game Over" subject to change with any good suggestions

So he came_and he went, more than just one time
didn't even_have to ask_he_offered.
he was eager_just to see me...
to have the opportunity to give me_
every bit_of his available attention.
spoke respectfully_dispite uual social demenor_
kept manners in retention.
touched sweetly_the prospect of sex, not once mentioned...
even while feeling his physical ascension.
relieved from all tention_
knowing every move made was strictly my decision.
no pressure he held me close_ and listened
replied with no superiority or critisim...
offered me a sort of wisdom...
through his inexperience cause like you have quoted before
 "the more we know, the less we see" and_you_
act as if you think your blind...
he was as intuitive as he is fine.
stayed with me as long as i was available,
no rushing off to be on the scene.
unconscerened with any other woman besides me.
made his feeling clear to hear_and see,
so i know he appreciates and respects the time he spends with me.
A weekend_was his blessing, and if given the chance he'd spend an eternity.
he offered me ralationships_ before relations_
stayed affectionate and attentive_during intellectual conversations
without feeling any negative sensations...
cause he_was passionate,
kissed me from my forehead_to the curve of my hip...
and still didn't push to hit_
but_ slowly took every bit of my being that i gave, even
pushed back plans so he could lay up in the shade_
and nap with me in the afternoon...
knowing that due to you, his time with me could end soon,
and hoping that you_continue to be a fool
even though i'm on the phone with you and he is in the other room...
that statement_is still true.
being foolish_is what you choose!
so_my little white lies and discrepancies_will not cause me_
to feel guilty!
cause the space that HE fills_is the space YOU leave empty!
had me playen house, cooked for him...
steamed fish & okra, rice & peas...
entertained associates & company,
infatuated with the thought_of comming home to somebody...
_even if only for the weekend,
even if its not with you_but with him.
did his hair & massaged his skin_
cause to him_im worth that time to spend.
and you know the line tween love & hate_is paper thin...
and even that much more weak to fracture_when pressured with my pen.
i told you once how i felt_& now im going out on a limb here...
see you dont want a next man to have me_still you your self dont wanna be here.
belly still aching_with just the thought of you...
abusing and using the feelings_that i have for you.
look closly now_everything i said of him_was ultimately about you...
what your apt to & dont do!
toying with my emotions...Not a good move!
game over_though i love you...
you can forget what you thought you knew!

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kinda a follow up to inspired

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