Sweet seductions work too well
And we are left in wonder
Of what has come and gone.
When words become more than words
The cinders left of passion
Make a cold bed
To lie upon, awake,
And yearning for mere words again.
Creating worlds for ourselves
To live free in
To love free whomever we choose
Without space to separate
The ones that truly care,
Whimpering when Illusion’s broken
And we must part across a distance.
Can we ask what awaits us?
Can we beg for what’s just out of reach?
All we have is time to give
And words to whisper
To console our hearts
Please tell me what you think
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all we have time to give.....that is good....keep up the writing

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Sithy this is a great Poem, It really makes people think and ask alot of different questions its really really good keep it up or samuel will get u

Dave
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Oh no not Samuel
THanks for the comment I'm glad you enjoyed 
~Sithy
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wow awesome poem i can kind of relate anywayz great write
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great write Sith
s! Truly!
love Yami Romich

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Love is such a mixture of things..it can sure be confusing at times. You've expressed your feelings very well.

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sweet and honest
very good write. and very very honest. you could not have hit the nail on the head more perfectly. i dont know what else to say besides a great write from a great author


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I think sometimes love is just an illusion designed to break our hearts and leave us dispair hoping someone will understand and love us again
the Satyr

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wow i love this write sweetheart it really is for us. and shows how i feel especially wow agin.


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