In it we are smiling
but I know We are lying
All I did that day involved crying
Even thaught about Dying
Slit my wrists
join me I am flying
I woke up in a bed
The last words I thaught I said
I was wrong
I don't know if I can be strong
Every time I see
That person in the photo smiling
She's not me
Please tell me what you think
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Welcome to AP!
Very dark thoughts here...sad
As a thought for improvement, you might check your spelling and capitalization in some places (just helpful hints) Thank you for sharing your poetry with us and welcome to AP; hope you enjoy the site as we will enjoy having you here! -
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thanks
thanks for the hints I am a really bad speller but as for the sadness all my poems are like that
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