love,love,isN'T aw-some
thanks to you and all the words
you say,HAVE EATEN MY HEART ALIVE and raw
I hoped to never see one day with you
to still be without
you
a heart and love so cruel and blue
send me a cup full of hate
and it'll be you last mistake
to think about...
In a list
A contest entry
- Hugs and Kisses from Me.. by Manda-Lou.
625 points, ended February 17, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
let me know whats on your mind
Comments
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This is cool. It's different from most other poems I've read today, but it's good. I like it. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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Welcome to AP!
Some pretty deep ideas and thoughts within this piece...
May I suggest not alternating between lower case and capital letters? It just makes your poem look so much better
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us and welcome to AP; hope you enjoy the site!
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