Feather-like,
we float,
as distant as light years are,
we are close,
you're there even when you're not..
and I know you always are..
If only..
Leave a piece of your mind..
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cool
this was pretty good! ehem, well yeah i know i haven't been around much lately, but i see you haven't lost your touch :-)
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I love it..it personally relates to me right now. The paradox: 'you are there even when you are not' strikes the rest, and the unfinished last line wraps this beautifully.
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"you're there even when you're not.."
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3azimé, that's all I have to say.
Elie
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if only indeed!!!
i dont know y i feel like u have much more to write but u strangled it inside or again maybe am cluless who knows
if only is the word indee everything is hanging on d if onlys
very touching NOur
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well, I guess the whole point was to make it short.. no string attached.. just a simple message to someone.. and if only.. well.. IF ONLY!
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well then hope that someone gets ur msg
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Leave a piece of my mind, ehhh, Nour??? Heyyy, I need all the pieces I have left, Sweetie...
But I WILL tell you this is a lovely penning, my dear Friend...& ahhh, I know this feeling well...Serene, pensive, a little wistful...Beautiful, Lady...
Birdy Girl
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birdy, thx for dropping by.. this was just a short thing.. to let someone know how much it means to me to have them around.. even when they're not..
love across the globe my birdy 
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