Creases fall from the corner
of your perfect nose
to the edge
of your sensual mouth
These two fjords of beauty
mark the signs
of your smile
frame the edges
of your teeth
Never in my life had I dreamed
of such oblivion
that sight becoming my life
of radical wows and whoas
girl of my dreams,
you’re gorgeous
Please tell me what you think
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Yes I can attribute this to someone in my life as well. The way you use your words to describe what you are feeling and seeing and with all of the other senses work very well here.
Russ`
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I never thought in a million years I would actually see someone use "fjord" in a poetic context and make it work. I think you're God.
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