Tears Of Love
Fall down on me
I'm in love again
She has set me free
From the very chains
That locked my soul
Shes the one
That made me whole
But those tears fall
Down like rain
Flooding this very
Body, making it float away
I want to have love again
I want to make sure
I don't screw up again
But is this possible
Could this even be me
Am I this lucky
For her to pick me
Maybe I'm the right guy
To have her in my life
I guess I'll wait and see.
Tears Of Love Fall Down Like Rain
Setting me free
Author notes
Afraid
A contest entry
- Hugs and Kisses from Me.. by Manda-Lou.
625 points, ended February 17, 2007, 16 entries
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Shes the one
she's**
i totally feel like a spellcheck
I want to have love again
I want to make sure
I don't screw up again
ME LIKES!!
CUTE me liked
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awwe
nice poem, its touching
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Thank you
Thank you for your reply if you have a chance can you tell me what you think of my other poems please?
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This is beautiful. You have written something wonderful. Good job. Thank you for entering and Good luck!
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Great job....well expressed and heart felt.
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It didn't really have a natural flow but I enjoyed it
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Thank You
Thank You If you have the chance you are more than welcome to check out my other poems...dragontuba
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