Creeping up on us
you steal our activity
ready us for bed
In a list
A contest entry
- Haiku Contest!! by KnightOfTheRose.
325 points, ended April 29, 2007, 39 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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It seems the darkness is designed to slow us down. But when younger I loved the night life. lol A short descriptive pieve of poetry
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great job! this haiku is soooooooooo strong! I really enjoyed reading this piece!!! thank you soooooooo much for entering!! excellent work and the best of luck in my contest!!!!!!!!
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I loved it!simple, but great. I miss reading your poems so very much and I am glad that I am slowly but surely signing on to AP more often. I missed you all tooo much! but anyways, this poem was great and the backround makes it perfet! great Job Niece!
Love Your Aunty Kara
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Superb!
Isn't the moon incredible!!!! What a wonderful write (I wish I knew Haiku!).
p.s. BLESS you and your wedding plans!!!!!
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I love this Haiku of yours. The moon is such an awesome and thought provoking part of our universe. You did a wonderful job with these three lines. Great work here and thanks for sharing this!
Jeremy0826
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Very deep poem and arising a lot of further thoughts-thats what poetry should do-ask and give the reader a chance to think about his life and perhaps find an answer-this poem does what it promises-great job. this was very enlightening.This is an exceptionally well-written with wonderful flow that adds greatly to the power of your words. I wish i could in my own words tell you how great this piece is without having to borrow from others.What an intricate piece, if it doesn't get you to stop and think, and be a little philosophical, then i think you missed the point.
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I think that you have captured the moon rising in full detail for three lines. I believe that the shortness of your poem gives cause for thought, yet conveys all that it needs to
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