i sit in the dark,cry alone
wonder why it got this far
i cannot accept,refuse,decline all i ever loved
it's gone to far
my heart is ripped
i bleed a river red
no more pain,no regrets
as it floats around in my head
all that hurt is now numb
relief at last i prayi lost the war with my only moments ago
true existence,a love so pure
all has dissapeared
noone understands my pain
nothing to stop me cry
darkness fails as light prevails
and i go to the place so pure
all has dissapeared
nothing will ever be the same
as i float upwards
towards you.
A contest entry
- Show me pure loneliness and pain by ThunderCatWonder08.
390 points, ended March 13, 2007, 23 entries
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good job
youve expressed yourself well and very descriptive excellent write but move on with hopw bcwith every love lost a new door opens and your one is waitng somewhere xxlorren
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