Darling Uncle and Mentor
I am so glad
you finally reached out
surpassing your feelings sad.
I could just shout.
I saw you pine
from lost unrequited love
now you are defined
by pure expressions thereof.
You loved sweet Yemina
who just won't commit
and your new senorina
will help you forget.
I love her too
since you love her
as her pain eschews
and your loss defers.
You have great heart
and much to impart
within your moral context
as romance you flex.
When my family loves
my wings just unfold
with my blessings shove
betrothed into love's fold.
You say lover's dreams
might say erotic things
whatever love's feelings seems
including lustful desires sing.
Your beloved is tender
more than you know
since we share gender
treat her gently so.
OK, I buy that
sensuality by dreams given
is honorable although inexact
with all whims forgiven.
But know your companion
is awed by love
must fear failing union
or any rejection thereof.
Iohagh
Janet McCall
Author notes
Darling Uncle
Treat her right dear
who loves you so
angels are always near
never let her go.
Smooshies
Janet
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Great acting job you have done for, however long it has been, that you have been deceiving all of the girls that believed in you. How many more of YOU are out there????????????????????? -
Lovely tribute to your uncle
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I love you three guys! Abdul is such a supporting brother for me and his words of wisdom bring smiles to my lips. Heidi is the lady of charm, so sweet to win my brother’s heart and you Janet, a lovely pixie you are and your words makes me feel warm and proud.
Keep on penning your sweetness since they are a source of delight
~Massy~
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THis is quite beautiful very loving piece
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Lovely...
Well-done...full of beautiful sentiments and thoughts. Thanks for sharing...All the best, Mat -
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Wonderful. I love the structure in this write. It flows very well and all the sentiment comes across to the reader as well. -
Its been a while since i commented onone of your poems, because I always just seem to write great! I always enjoy reading your poems, Janet. You have such a good way with words
a lovely piece, full of love and emotion! another great piece!
webber
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So loving you and that Uncle
xoxo
Auntie
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So gentle, sweet, of simple life
She yearns for love and no more strife
She is my sister held so dear
So AT is brother to me too, I fear!
Smooshes Janet, put brilliantly and aptly and and AT she loves simply and divinely, of this I am sure
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Sister of mine...
You are so very
truly dear to me
You love me like
we share like blood.
xoox
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Beautiful rhyming abab quatrain. This is a wonderful piece, good structure and flow. The words simply fell off my lips making for an enjoyable read. Your verbiage is well chosen so as to use as few words for a deep expansive image.
Amera
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you know a part of me wishes i had more ppl like you uncle in my life but i only have my mother, you did a great job on this keep it flowing
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Dear Neice
Here's your applause for
loving you dear uncle
I promise you more
to avoid obvious debunkles.
Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari
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Ditto brother, in far more ways than you can possibly know. I lucked out only in that I had a marvelous option provided by God in my Ying. As I said God forgives sinners but not fools. Thus neither of us should fear nor reject what he places before us in blazing glory.
peace and love to you and yours..and, of course..to our Janet.
JD
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Yes this is nice
I am speaking through
you to my boo
I will be there
as she still cares.
AT
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