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My Broken Heart

Today i looked at you.
Today i hurt myself.
i just can't stand
thinking these thoughts.

The thoughts of
what
we
could
be

I tear myself from them.
I tear myself from you.
I've got to stop
upsetting myself.

The thoughts
just
tear
into
me

I cried today.
but I tried today
to just forget about
this pointless crush.

The thoughts
just
will
not
stop

Can't you see what you happen
to be doing to me?
Can't you tell, you're making
my life an almost living hell.

But...
I
can't
hate
you.

I can't even try to.
I can only fall head
over heels into a
puddle of my broken heart

Author notes

hmm.. just thought of this as i looked at you. but you'll never know who you are.. hehe. i'm a little drama queen

ever felt like this?

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  • Mr Majenta gold member
    February 6, 2007
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    who could it be?

    who is this mystery man, or... woman?!?!
    perhaps that is why it is a secret
    well, i hope you know i'm always here for you. have i introduced you to my friend the male lesbian guitarist?


    • draagyn
      September 9, 2008
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      i wonder if you've looked at this one in awhile... who was that mystery man? lol. u should definately have an inkling now

      • Mr Majenta gold member
        September 9, 2008
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        is it baylee?


        • draagyn
          September 13, 2008
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          oh yes... she and i did get pretty close after you left... we even slept in the same bed lol.
          i love you


    • draagyn
      February 8, 2007
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      no, you haven't introduced me.. not that i know of anyway. and it's definitely a mystery man, though the australian might think differently lol.. no he knows any...wait no he doesn't lol. i laugh at his ignorance. my last poem was almost called mystery man, but psh, too. nah. lol. miss ya muchly!


  • ShInE45DoWn
    February 6, 2007
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    iii hear yah.

    looovvve it.


    • draagyn
      February 8, 2007
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      I MISS BAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYy.. so this summer you are sooooo staying with me for a week and then we'll go to ur house k? but i need a job. grsh dran it.! lol. we must do something though

  • ShInE45DoWn
    February 6, 2007
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    iii hear yah.

    looovvve it.

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