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The One For Me

I love you forever and more,
you are the one I truly adore.

When I look into your eyes,
I know I no longer have to cry.

Your touch is so gentle,
your kiss is so sweet.

When I see you walk by,
my heart skips a beat and says there's my guy.

When you take my hand I feel so safe,
being held by you is warmth from your embrace.

You are the one for me,
forever and always we're ment to be.

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  • 2lullabyhaven
    October 31, 2007

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    This is a delightful, lighthearted poem, full of imagery of your loved one, hold on tight, love is a treasure, not all of us get to have ... smilelol


  • I will stand by you
    October 30, 2007
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    great write.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 14, 2007

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    This is a very sweet.Love is a beautiful gift that should be treasured always,Thank you for sharing


  • ronnica
    July 9, 2007

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    Very neat package, flows well and has a great romantic feel, I like the feeling safe with someone,and the "meant to be."

  • mcheadle
    July 9, 2007
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    wow

    This I would say is an all together poem you have writen,, good luck mac


  • Decorus Somnium
    February 22, 2007

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    Love the way you write. It's so peaceful and lovely. This is an awesome poem with true feelings.
    Keep up the great work
    God Bless you
    ~MagicalMoon~


  • kitkat08
    February 6, 2007

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    i love it

    hey sis wuz up me nothing to much here just sitting here at the library checking mail and stuff..... god i aint talked to u in forever its been ages it seems like i have so much to tell u... i probably wont be sighning on to yahoo anymore because my grandmother got rid of the net so now i have to come to the library to check my email but anywayz i wuz just dropping in to check on everybody and say hiiii soo hiii and bye and i love this poem its great umm i miss u all and yes i still love everybody umm tell patrick i said hii and that i miss him and love him and tell him i said to email me whenever he gets the chance.... umm i g2g i love ya sis


    your friend foralways and forever kitkat

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