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Alluring Mystery (Acrostic)

Ages of wisdom woven within alluring beauty
Looks so fierce, mystery hidden within each gaze
Long, sleek legs pound against barren, wintry land
Undying hunger travels through their veins
Reflections of an all-knowing breed
Intellect and determination clearly etched upon faces
Nature's perfect fighting machine
Gaining respect and appreciation from many

Muscular physique covered by long, thick fur
Years of skill shine through deep, insightful eyes
Stance, straight and tall, gazing upon neverending land
Thinking of family, the pack, in calling in the distance
Elegance and finéss apparent within each step
Remembrance of power hidden behind forest walls
Yet, amongst the distant mountains, two orbs glow bright; hinting what lies in the darkness...

Author notes

Yup..."Trying" to get back into my writing.. we'll see how long this lasts..

The background was done for me by Paul (kirbysman). Thank you very much 's and ♥

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  • Crystal Ellens
    September 11, 2007

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    wow such a beautiful write. It's very good for trying to get back into your writing, I think you did a wonderful job. I really enjoyed reading.


  • owlishhunter
    July 14, 2007

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    WOW!!! I simply love this write!! You paint an incredible picture and capture the "alluring mystery" in a most beautiful manner! Truly a fantastic write from my new ap daughter!
    Be good!
    ~Kris


  • My Darkness
    February 21, 2007

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    i think this is a good start, getting back into the swing of things anyway.. i really enjoyed this, unique subject! but well done! thanks for sharing and keep up the great work!

  • pattyann4500
    February 6, 2007

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    Nicole, I love this. You have portrayed the mighty roll with much respect. Such beautiful animals, and you write wonderfully of them. Great poem. Hugs, Patricia


  • kirbysman Moderators member
    February 5, 2007

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    Hey, this sounds like a wolf with a clear and concise picture constructed and painted here. Wolves are mysterious and fascinating things and that shows here in what you've written. It is amazing how intelligent they look. Nicely done Lady Nic.


    Paul

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