*tears fall*
Do you ever get that feeling?
The feeling of hope?
The feeling of love?
Just to find your heart in a chained
up black metal box?
*heart aches*
You hope so much.
You take your chance with love
but then give it up before you
you take the time to find the
key to unlock that little box?
*body shakes*
I guess what i am trying to
say is this.
I hurt inside and i can't
find the bliss.
I want to take the biggest
chance all i want to do
is dance with life.
*Tears Fall*
Do you ever love so much
you cry? (tears)
Do you ever hurt so much
you die inside? (fall)
if you're alone, this poem
is for you
this is for those who
don't know what to do
My insides are muddled
and i can't find the time
to unwind my feelings, my
hopes, and my rhymes.
sitting in the misery of
emptiness.
trying to find the energy
to just leave the nest
i cry as i try and then
i give up
feelings are broken
feelings unspoken
tears fall
heart aches
body shakes
tears fall
the mantra again
tears fall
heart aches
body shakes
tears fall
tears ... fall
heart ... aches
body ... shakes
tears
f
a
l
l
Author notes
Hey all you who are reading this hole of a heart. just 'lashing out' with the mouth words of my heart.
or maybe i'm just bein' silly, stupid, and young.
Truth echoes, though, and tears fall.
ever get that feelin'?
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I enjoyed reading this. I really like how you put some things in asterisks. It really flows.
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thanks. the asterisks were meant to be sort of a...motion instead of verbal communication. . . i don't know if that worked exactly but that was my motive.
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february 5th, the day that i made my to be girlfriend go a little crazy inside
i never knew about any but the last one
and to think, i was just as reluctant 17 ago on the 17 -
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i am so confused... yes you did make me go a lot crazy! but your next two lines befuddle me and since when did you decide to go looking through my old writes? lol. weirdo. gotta love you though
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seventeen months ago, on the seventeenth, unless i added wrong
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thats what i thought you meant, but it's not quite 17/17 yet. that's in september, love
four more days.
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Amazing
Wow. I really like this.
I really connect with the feelings in it and i think it's wonderfully written.
Great Write.
<3 xoxo
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