Voluptuous in the feminine sense,
sensuous model of sheer Earthiness.
A vision sway spill rocking roll of hips,
match of paled ruby sheen of honest lips.
Uninhibted poses innocence for the artist brush,
his mind's eye see much more in tender touch.
A beauty beyond mere lusting for the flesh,
of consoling kisses and spirit's mend addressed.
A semi nude compilation of bared Motherhood,
of woman creator of life so exquisitely understood.
By the artiste' slathered brush strokes of oils hued,
and a poet's quilled hand command of the writing muse.
Femininity robustly fills the canvass envisioned,
and the crisp poet's parchment worded submission.
Author notes
won a silver in shewolfnative's contest.
In a list
A contest entry
- Dive In - One hour Contest I - 4 by CarolDesjarlais.
300 points, ended February 5, 2007, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This was very nice and well done. What a unique graphic with it. Congrats on your silver trophy!
Kari -
Wow! congratulations on your silver trophy. What an art-inspired write! Simply beautiful, me dahlin'. ♥ Belle
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congratulations on the silver!
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A Painter's muse
I enjoyed the image as well as the fine descriptive
words, here a painter finding form contour of feminine creature,and a poet seeing deeper into creation and warmth of all that is mother..original and classic.
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Thank you Cappy! I just noticed it was over my self. Makes me think of honoring man/fatherhood in an other write too. Callous and tired by having brought a family all the love and security he could in life is important as well. Things we always knew. But I at the downhill slope of 50"s more so than ever.
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Congratulations!!!
This is excellent.
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Oh, wow, I can't believe you wrote this in one hour!!!
Beautiful! Congrats!
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Oh, beatuiful language.....beautifully penned power....love it.
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