Tonight, the moon shone so brightly in the sky, and
He stood next to me, telling me he never loved me
Ending what we had for so long now.
Moments passed, when found alone and sad.
Only he could bring back my smile
Only he could could stop the tears.
No one helped for a while till I decided it was time to come out of this depression.
Seriousness brought his voice back,
High sky-diving and motorcycles gave me that freedom.
I knew that when Alice came, life would turn around.
Now I knew that Edward was in trouble and needed to save him from himself.
Edward thought that I was gone
So I showed him the truth in her lies.
Brightly the moon shone that night
Rich in love and happiness back
I found him and loved him
Garnet eyes reflecting my image
Him telling me he'd always need me
To know that everything else is meaningless, and
You're the only one to lighten one's world under the darkness of a world without a shining moon.
Author notes
Quote:
"Before you, Bella, my life was a moonless night. Very dark but there were stars-points of light and reason. and then you shot across my sky like a meteror. Suddenly everything was on fire; there was brilliancy, ther was beauty. When you were gone, when the meteror had fallen over the horizon, everything was black. Nothing had changed, but my eyes were blinded by the light. I couldnt see the stars anymore. And there was no more reason for anything"
From New Moon
A contest entry
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Wonderful
I entered a little piece for this contest but after reading that, i hope you win.
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WOW
I love this awesome write and good luck in the contest!
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That was fantasmical. You truly captured the story in a beautiful light. Good Luck in the contest!
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This is a beautiful piece and i felt the emotion come out of it. i really enjoyed reading it. Great job.
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Great work, kitten. The poem suites the quote so very well. Nice use of the acrostic style, you're definately improving. -
Lovely!
Hey, you knocked my sox off with this! I also love the colour.
I hope you are aware your skills as a writer/poet have skyrocketed? This is phenomenal.
Keep it up...
love;
Goompa!!!!!
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