When I wish upon a star I'll always see his face,
When I pluck the petals off a flower it will always land on He loves me,
His voice, to me, sounds like a sweet, soft melody,
His eyes are a deep blue, like the glistening ocean,
His hair, a soft brown, almost the color of mine,
I will always wish upon my lucky star that we will be together.
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It's not based on anyone, ok.
Please tell me what you think
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i might of put a face on my acount if i diddn't then sorry -
Great
hay alissa great poem. oh by the way its me kristi i changed my name as you can see once again great write -
I love this A. Great job. One question, how did you get close enough to see his eye color?
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I didn't know that was his eye color, I didn't base this on anyone!!!
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this is really nice and well written well done from Lu
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