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The Crowd

                          Inside I feel
                            that the pain is spreading
                      I can't belive
                      that this is happening
                  The crowd outside
                        is out there waiting
                    inside I feel that there is something wrong.
              I don't want to know
                      but the crowd is waiting.
                The crowd the crowd outside
                    is gospiping
                  only about me..
                          the crowd
                    the crowd

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  • Diatribes
    November 4, 2007

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    Anxiety and paranoia.
    I'd rather have gasoline and a live powerline.
    "Oooooh, pretty sparklies and fire!!!!"