I'm not the role model that you seek
I'm without a paddal up shitlane creek
I only wanted to help you feel better
But i'm just making it so much worse!
You entrusted me with that precious letter
And i lost it, it was going to happen of course
I should of just left you too it
I'm not the one to help you through this
I'm a useless friend, i can see that now
I'm not any better for you than i am for me
I want to hurt if that's what it takes
To make everything ok again
What kind of role model is that?
Not a very good one.
I'm sorry, i'm a useless friend
Your poured your heart out in that note
And i lost it, you'll have no faith in me again.
I'm sorry, i failed you like i failed everyone else.
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you didnt lose it silly........you just forgot that you were wearing my jacket when she gave it too you........ silly thing
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This is so sad.
If this is based on real life then that is so sad.
It was well written. I also commented on one of your poems for a comp you did, I thought that was good too. I think I will read your other stuff.
Well done and if this person is a friend I am sure they will forgive you for what ever it was you did.
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Hrrrrm unhappy Gemmi? Cheer up choock. Nice poem, if you can really call it that though. I like the attempt at rhyming thought.
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