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new thought

Unknowingly I entered a stream of
conciousness I did not understand
Paraded myself with dark and useless
emotions and thoughts
Instead of taking in what I
know I want, what I have
to need, what I have to feel in
order to achieve
I believe I have entered
a new stream of conciousness

Please tell me what you think

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  • wings of an angel
    February 6, 2007
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    This is a lovely poem you have penned here jackson well done dear poet


  • Theater Of Dreams
    February 5, 2007

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    Hey!

    This kicked me in the butt! I like it, it looks original- and the ideal of 'Stream of Consciousness' is particularly nice. Really- I am impressed.


    -James.


  • briareus gold member
    February 5, 2007

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    Dark emotions and thoughts may be just what we need, don't know why they would be useless.

    Allpoetry is a stream of consciousness. If for you it's new, Welcome