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To Know

I wanna know if I mean something to you,
To know if you mean something to me.
To know if this is for fun,
Or something meant to be.

I wanna know how I make you feel,
But you never let me know
Without me, would you easily move on?
Or would I be hard to let go?

I wonder if you think I'm beautiful
If I make you want to miss me
Because I think of you all the time
And I'm curious if I make you happy

I wish you would let me know,
I'm so confused about how I should feel
I want to know what you'r thinking on your end
If I should take time to see if this is real

Please tell me what you think

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  • angelsslayer
    August 19, 2007

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    Relatable.

    Wanting to know answers, but not wanting to ask either... been there i guess Clear poem, i liked reading it.


  • grannyeri gold member
    April 30, 2007

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    It is confusing when no one really says anything about how they feel in the relationship - both sides are wondering all the time - just need to ask and be honest. Liked the flow, rhythm and rhyme in these lines. Easy to read and understand.

  • NicotineHeartbreak
    February 15, 2007

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    You should feel however you want to feel, and try asking him how he feels, because there's no better way to find out than a straight answer. A good write, and I'm sure he does think you're beautiful.
    Maybe you're both scared to make the first move on turnng this thing serious because you don't know if that's what the other wants, so I think you need to sit him down and talk it out.

    A good write, although a sad one.

    Good luck

    x x x


  • Dead Star--x
    February 14, 2007
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    one word enexperiance!!!! give him time hell come around.. i think he thinks if he call syou pretty or something he might think its to corney, i mean for you it even might be to corny.. but he obviously thinks youre cute or he wouldnt be dating you!!!
    *Abused *
  • Liquid memories
    February 9, 2007

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    Reflecting

    Finding answers to loves question can a long lonesome road, without solving lifes questions.I hope this turns out well and with happiness. Jules.
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