Our Valentines amidst dreams
God, we dreamed stroking
Sahabah, I, slowly undress
with garter tops poking
one leg up pantyless.
Sahabah's eyes stared straight
holding juicy breasts one
with another hand awaits
rubbing her clitoris mons.
Sahabah begs me to
come penetrate her there
bending her over through
as she inhales air.
Sahabah withdrew to have
me within her arms
kneeling as she behaves
hungrily swallowing my charms.
My back arches, spew
our first orgasm too
with Sahabah who blew
with her fountain's dew.
Together we scream out
calling for love's protection
falling in congress shout
over into one direction.
A chair went flying
as we hit bed
now moving together dying
titties my mouth fed.
Sahabah swooned and cried
while I sobbed too
together we lived, died
one body, heads askew.
Sahabah turned over to
doggie style upon knees
I impaling she who
rode my fleshy tree.
Then, cunnilingus was done
with fellatio sixty nine
we both repeatedly come
while dreaming love divine.
Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari
Author notes
Dear friends
Of course, this a dream's re-counting is a Valentine's Day present. Dream sex is viable to my aesthetic as it is read for interpretation. I would say from these dreams retold as one that love is possible between the dreamers since we had a similar dream while asleep poetically transcribed. That being said ciao for now.
In a list
A contest entry
- Naughty Love....A Valentine Contest by Barbara.
675 points, ended February 12, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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So sweet it was like always. Whenever I cam across your page, my heart fills of delightful feelings. I am also thankful of Allah for putting this lady of charm on your way. May your love remain strong and vitalizied.
Thank you for sharing your feeling with us :-)
~Massy~
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Amazingly Erotic
You gave the readers some great pictures to feast on. Mr. Abdul, you are man full spice and ardent dreams, and your writing is brilliant. ...Novy
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Naughty, naughty, and very well done. I like the flow and description in this, as well as the visual imagery that your lines bring.
Thank you for entering, and good luck with the contest.
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Oh, now that is what I call a valentine's gift!
Unfortunately it's one I never received in all my years--only one of the trillion and three reasons I hate Valentine's Day with a passion.
Although I do love this poem, which maybe I would write something remotely similar if I were not so drained of creative energy (and perhaps had a boyfriend...sigh) The flow is wonderful, and I do love your rhyming. I can't even pull that off these days. (shakes head at her own dwindling capabilities)
I hope you are well (well, of course you are with such a furious riptide of passion, right?)
Many blessings,
Raven Aurora
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Hate the day as they say...
Hate the Valentines Day
but not day dreamers
whatever anyone may say
lovers awaken as beamers.
Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari
formerly Mage Amazigh
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raw, liquid emotion! :)
Abdul,
Next time you do one of these please do not hold back, tell us what you 'really' feel!! LOL!!!
Now excuse me while I call IT to come replace my melted monitor and hard drive! LOL!
JD
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wow amazing and erotic. Very sensual. A very beautiful write,lol my mama never told me bout this dream
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Oh my...
Not the child...the child is not supposed to see the dream lol...child you may be ... but every bit beautiful woman... is he not fantastic??? 
xo
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Now thats what I am talking about...
Darlings
Rock Sahabah's world right
invading even her dreams
give her every delight
as yours doves preen.
Smooshies LOL
Janet
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LOL...
You tickle me to the core Janet...
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LOL
It seems that job is already filled. Sahabah and the job for hire sign is in the garbage. -
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OKAY....
I will be in tears with laughter if you do not stop...lol **wondering if the sign has been shredded**
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Oh my my my ...
ANA BAHIBBIK!!!!!
XOXO
Your Sahabah
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Great
A true love poem, that fit the description of Naught Love a Valentine contest. I really enjoyed both the flow and the rthym and the emotions expressed. You painted a vivid picture in the minds of the readers, again great job. John
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