Pain engulfs my soul
Sadness invades my heart
Questions fill my mind
Since my life was ripped apart
Lonliness goes through my body
Fear torments my dreams
Memories take over my waking moments
I'll never be free, it seems
Want controls my life
Need makes me miss you more
Death promises that it would be better
Than you violently throwing love to the floor
A contest entry
- The Broken R! by Ms Raneika.
600 points, ended March 9, 2007, 88 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Release Me by sensualbutterfly.
300 points, ended July 28, 2008, 79 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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"Death promises that it would be better"
"Than you violently throwing love to the floor"
You are a very talented writer. I thank you for sharing your work with me -
I really like the format of the piece and yout choice of words....great write...thanks for entering my contest much love, Raneika
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Thank you!!!! Seems I entered alot in your contest! Sorry! Thank you for reading and commenting on them all!!!!
~DAWN~
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Good and Painfull
I am reading this and hoping it is not true
You were so happy
Rick
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Ahhhh We are having problems and he's a typical guy. Instead of facing them he runs away!
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