I finaly got you to smile.
Then something did surprise me.
The sparkle in your eye,
the way your face lights up.
I never thought i would see an angel,
but i did that day in your eyes.
When i looked closer i realised,
i wasen't seeing an angel in your eyes.
I was seeing into an angels eyes.
Author notes
This is for my currnt boyfriend because it is his smile that this poem is about.
A contest entry
- Give me your very best! by Carly Pop.
450 points, ended April 3, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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i am smiling babe. i will always love you. no matter what happens
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wow i love it .even tho its not about me
lol
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great!!
this is great, I mean it I really like it a lot! the only thing is your punctuatuion and spelling in a few spots needs correction. if you could correct before I judge the contest that would be wonderful. thanks! Carly
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Smiles light up the space around the one who smiles, eyes are windows and mirrors, what we are always seeking, sometimes finding. Some who don't smile easily, or seldom, so we have to do something to make it happen. Boundaries between 'self' and 'other' -- we see the other in ourself and our ourself in the other, a game of reflections, with hidden forces in play
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thank you for your beautyfull comment but i didn't understand it fully.
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Beautiful
This is a lovely peom which also made me smile!!! Short and sweet but with the most beautiful ending. Well done on this. (I hope your boyfriend is smiling over this)
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thank you so much i hope he does to when he reads it.
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