I never wanted us to end
But now my heart is on the mend
You ripped my heart right from my chest
You said we're through, I should have guessed
You swore you could be mine no more
You took your bag, walked out the door
You didn't stop and turn and look
As you left, my body shook
Dropped to my knees, began to cry
Could not believe, you said goodbye
This had been, my darkest fear
You didn't even shed a tear
And as I heard you shut the door
I wished that I had told you more,
That I love you, with all my heart
I loved you from the very start
But I messed up, now it's to late
Or maybe you, just weren't my fate
You never matched, my love for you
You never would, this much is true
We're probably better off, this way
We'll meet again, another day
A contest entry
- Give it your all by livelife.
450 points, ended February 13, 2007, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Excellent rhyme and rhythm. It really hurts when they act like they dont care doesnt it?
Very well done
Thanks for entering and good luck.
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Ok.. I read this before and commented on it and everything.. but it just made me cry..
I heart you Wyatt!
Don't be sad!!!!
(not that me "hearting" you would make you all that happy.. but hey.. I try.)
Angie <3 -
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You "hearting" me makes me very happy
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WoW!
This was very personal, loved it! Good Luck in the Contest!
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this poem is great i can relate to this poem because i had that feeling once upon a time when my ex left me and he never came back, i was too late.
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I know I keep saying the same things over and over but I really do love your poetry and I can't really pinpoint why...it just really appeals to me =). Take care xx
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Wow
Weird life, how we think of this someone we think we can't live without them yet we can but only when forced. I think a lot of people like me will relate to this just like me. great job
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Awww.. You'll find your' perfect girl.. someone who won't hurt you..and who will put up with all your' crap 'cos she loves you.
No more sad poems..lol
Angie <3
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