You live among my dreams,
always a comfort,
when the world is falling apart,
your always there for me.
Your arms are my shelter,
your heart my home,
there is were I hide,
when the world seeks to destroy me.
Your eyes hold my future,
your hands my sanity,
you are my inspiration,
my words, my paint.
Without you,
words are meaningless,
without your love,
my heart sickens.
Don't leave Night Time Lover,
you hold my heart in your hands,
Without you,
my heart would break.
" Like falling glass,
I'd try to catch the pieces,
only to have them slip through my hands,
cutting as they fall."
Don't decieve me Night Time Lover,
for I will always beleive you,
you are my truth,
my life.
Love me Night Time Lover,
for you awaken the fires within my heart,
hold me,
as not to let me fall.
From the storm you are my cover,
From the world you are my protector,
stay near me,
Night Time Lover.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I found a hidden meaning in my Poem
I wrote this after a huge heartbreak.
I just realized how this pertains to my God!
Wow. Thats cool. -
-Beautiful
YOu are the most artistic person I know, you are articulate with your writing. This poem was wonderful
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wow this is awsome. i like this alot. i think you did an excelent job when you wrote this too. i hope you continue to write this well and keep a great outlook on life. stay well and sleep well.
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very good. the form is somewhat choppy, and i dont feel it was used to the poems good but maybe you did that purposely. some of the diction was strange, im not sure if i liked or disliked it. overall it was good. keep writing, and following god through scripture.
Doug Cundall
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