Ive only dated a few, some I held closer then the others.
But none the less, i've had my share of love an lust.
But what I dont get, is how I keep screwing up.
Its a common occurance, I treat the girl the best I can.
But in return, she sleeps with another man.
I spend almost every penny to buy her something.
An she thanks me by deciving me.
To give a cheating lover another chance.
Is like asking for another bullet in russian rollete.
Just another reoccuring event.
Such a beautiful thing,
whyd you believe what those idiots said about me.
After all they did to me in my past,
you expected the truth from his ass?
So thats the reason you left me.
But before you did, you cheated on me again.
Damn an to think I called you a lover and a friend.
I'll never look at you the same again.
I've told you the truth, i've even proved it to you.
Yet, you stay in his arms...like I was a joke to you.
You tell me you still love me, an youd do anything for me.
I have the notes you left, on the poems I wrote.
Yet, you go back to him...even after you said,
"You want to be with me again".
Damn am i making the same mistake again?
I feel like im offering you to hurt me again.
Damn im an idiot.
A contest entry
- my blood my tears spell these words on my heart & on my wrist by melodramatic emo.
650 points, ended February 14, 2007, 11 entries
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Ok. I see alot of pucuation errors. Alot of "an"s should be "and"s. You forgot punctation in conjunctions too. Fix those please. I will be back.!
Lots of Love
**Amanda** -
hmm I liked this the emotion pours out of it its very deep and I like the sense of doubt and such it seems very honest and I like that its also relatable because im sure everyone has been there before I know I have anyways thats for joing and good luck
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