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[ What have I done to be treated like this... ]

What have I done to be treated like this...
I have done nothing but to try to make you proud...
I never felt any love from you...
I think I will never do...

You think that whispers destroy your credibility?
Look at me and look at your surroundings...
I have done nothing but to try to make you proud...

You care for your job more than you care for me...
Who the heck am I?
I just have to accept the truth...
You will never accept me as I am...

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  • Lj-
    February 5, 2007

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    This is good. Has a lot of raw emotion throughout it.

    I liked:

    "I just have to accept the truth...
    You will never accept me as I am..."

    Keep it up!