They watch us in the darkness
And chase us through the night
A shadow from another realm
With crimson eyes that shine so bright.
Their claws could rip your skin to shreds
Although that's not their goal
They pin you to the wall or ground
So that they can steal your soul.
With each new victims gory fate
New powers they contain
And the screeches at the crack of dawn
Will soon drive us all insane.
Their three inch fangs are deadly
Once you're in their grasp
They strike so suddenly
Like a cobra or an asp.
They're always in our thoughts and minds
And haunt us in our dreams
Hear their victims as they fall
And let out last piercing screams.
These creatures are invulnerable
Travel in packs of five
People have yet to capture them
And no one will survive~
Author notes
This is DarkenedAuras
Hope this creature is creative enough 
In a list
A contest entry
- The Factor Finals Round 9 by Frodofan.
475 points, ended February 16, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pre Write Contest by SensualWhispers.
615 points, ended March 15, 2007, 100 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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NICE!!!
I love it. It's dark, deep, exceptionally well written and flow absolutely wonderfully. Excellent write. Thank you so much for entering the contest and the best of luck to you. Kassie -
Oooh, creepy picture- Gives me the shivers, but the poem is well-penned and it has a great, uninterrupted flow. Speaks highly of talent.
Good luck,
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creeeeepy!
You certainly created a fearsome creature here. The poem has great imagery and lots of emotion. I like the rhyme.
"No one will survive,' make me shiver,,,,
Richard
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Great flow... amazing imagery! Thanks a lot... that means I'm gonna have night mares! Great! Rock On! lol xoox mEg
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Neat piece. Good imagery and rhyme. Thanks for entering!
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wonderful
This piece was wonderful. Exceptionally written and very creative. Good write and good luck!
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