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Your name

So many questions left unasked,

And our conversations stay in my head,

You've left me lost and confused, 

From that day I saw you in the rain,

 

I've given you every name in my mind,

But not one sounds right,

No age fits your body,

 

Searching for you,

I go back to that place,

But it seems like it was never there,

 

Seen only once,

I still remember the colour of your eyes,

The rithym of your walk I can't wash out of my ears,

 

I may just stop looking for you,

For I don't even know your name...

 

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  • Dienush
    February 7, 2007

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    This poem is interesting. I have once liked a total stranger that much myself. On the other hand, I can see at least one more way this could be interpreted. Thank you for entering.

    ~Diana