Uncertain
Step by step I fear
Eternity is so near
Slow to the end of the pier
How did I get here?
Spent my life and now it’s clear
Final plunge is so austere
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Sedoka
Sedoka does not have to rhyme, I decided to complicate it. With an “a” rhyme scheme through out the poem.
The Sedoka is usually an unrhymed poem made up of two three-line katauta with the following syllable counts: 5/7/7, 5/7/7. A Sedoka, pair of katauta as a single poem, may address the same subject from differing perspectives.
Katauta is an unrhymed three-line poem the following syllable counts: 5/7/7.
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This is a differnt poem style I wil have to try it.
I like the two differnt perpectives. You did complicate it by rhyming but in a good way -
Cool I will try it.
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Excellent !! very well done photo
perfect . Hugs Gloria -
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this is very deep,
i had to read it over and stop to think,
not often do i do that,
fantastic
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Thank you for your entry into my contest. This was a beautiful piece. I thank you for taking the time to put it into a special form.
Good luck in the contest.
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So cool. I liked it. I really, really, liked it. I really, really, really, liked it. So, I give it one bunny. Then I gie it another bunny. Then I give it another bunny. Then I'm done.
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What a lovely picture and presentation you have created with this page - lovely form as well - will need to check into this more-might have to write some poem using this form too.
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