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Twilight's Shadows

Shadows cast upon the wall
Moonlight shines through the curtains
His low voice whispers in my ear
His lips brushing against my neck.

His love shown through his words
His body hard and soft in all the same pattern.
His arms around me hold me close
And the words so smooth he says he loves me.

The smell of our love making sweet and light
The slow caresses he lays across my body,
To me, he quietly sings words so pure
And calls me his love forevermore.

Promise me this one last thing,
His voice scarce of any playfulness
And I look in eyes of the mellifluous earthy brown
I know the next thing he wants me to covenant.

"Promise me that you shall never leave..."
Tears lighly fill to the brim as I look into those ashen eyes.
"For you, my angel, I will never leave."
I promise him and kiss the pink lips I still yearn for.

Sweetly smiling, he kisses me back,
The passion set in his eyes.
"I love you," he tells me, his eyes covered in tears as well.
Repeating his words, I smile gently and cuddle with him.

For him, I shall always love
And be with till the end of time.
Forever now, I am his guardian angel
And he is the one I shall always need.

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5) Love poems of course.

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  • CloudlessClimbs
    February 7, 2007
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    The one thing that really stands out ot me is that you used "soft" alot to discribe different aspects of him..I don't really like that, I would try to find another word to discribe the softness of each thing to emphasise it more. Other than that this was an enjoyable read. Gl in my contest