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Mi Gatita

Mi gatita,
Mi vida no está completa sin tú. Tú escuchásme cuando nadie se queda,
Aun en mi hora más obscura.

Mi vida no está completa sin tú. Tú llenas mi corazón.
Aun en mi hora más obscura,
Tú me haces sonreír.

Tú llenas mi corazón.
Cuando tiempos son duros,
Tú me haces sonreír.
Yo te amo.

Cuando tiempos son duros,
Tú escuchásme cuando nadie se queda.
Yo te amo,
Mi gatita.

Author notes

Written for my girlfriend since our first year anniversary is coming up this Friday. Also, my first attempt at writing a poem in Spanish and in the style of Pantoum.

For some reason allpeotry is messing up my line structure. All punctuation represents a new line. I have tried fixing it but it just isn't working.

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  • FlipperSwitch
    February 10, 2007

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    Me encanta el primer 'line'. Este poema es muy bonita...este es muy especial por tu novia. Muy bueno escrita.

    (My Spanish needs work- -But Great write by you. )


    • burningcello
      February 11, 2007
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      I am glad you liked it. I wrote it for our one year anniversary of dating.

      Also, your Spanish is good and line is línea.

      I do like your contest idea and I think I will enter and will add a twist you might like.