Darling, some family advice
Let me say this
eat love up girl
enjoy fully your bliss
rock his entire world.
Kissing makes it better
bare your lover's soul
especially under your sweater
that is our role.
My Irish soul says
rejoice your contentedness here
few are happy days
sup your fill dear.
Know this moment well
for few are loved
as your tears swell
or like you hugged.
Kiss your beloved now
savor his tender eyes
even through pillows how
give him fulfilled sighs.
You are both dreams
so sleep going crazy
despite how it seems
mesh crayons blending hazy.
Don't waste each moment
take your blessings home
which God has sent
to you to atone.
Yesterday was a nightmare
you have now awoken
that you are aware
by God's will spoken.
And have hot sex
drain your lover dry
within your moral context
before each other dies.
Iohagh
Janet McCall
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Darlings
This started out as an IM add message to a page and I had to put it here for everyone.
PS- I going to publish this for both of you. Woo Woo. You guys are making me hot. LOL
Smoosh
Janet
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Well sage advice...
as the time ticks so my eyes that clicks, photo's of infinity when gazing this chi, just right you get the feelings of layers beyond the wonderful flow and rhyme here, ones such as 'you are both dreams, so sleep going crazy' and so true your moments that states the art of love the few and blessed pilars of a world tetering on fear and oblivion as such all the encouragement in the word and spirit power is needed for those that can, and as the last line brings me joy to the great honesty I salute your advice BRAVO
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I feel like i am commenting on something I know nothing about. So, here goes. I know nothing about this. I know love, love and love. Love for family, love for flesh, and love for spirit. All I can say is I would never suggest or condone anyone compromise spiritual love for the other kinds. As long as spiritual love is on board, get as freaky as you want and I condone wholeheartedly. Whew. Now I am ready to run for office! Three meta-loving bunnies for you, and a big goofy smile from the presenter.
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Beautiful poem my sis.Keep writin
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Great peom here janet, I enjoyed the flow and the rthym, as always you weave magic. Still twas both hot and moving, Love with smooshes John
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Feel as I am in the midst of a very serious private matter here - the comments back and forth, the advice from others - LOL Did enjoy your poem, and will just sist back and let nature take it's course.
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Great advice Janet..Time is certainly nothing to waste..it is so very precious...I wish Abdul as well as you much love and happiness..
Love..Dusty
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You are not the only one Janet lol, such love and warmth to both of them, I just love it and they will too, if they take their eyes off one another long enough!!!!
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very well written keep up the good work
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Janet, Abdul,
A good part of me agrees wholeheartedly with Janet, and while I am not Muslim, nor a saint by far, I am religious and do have my sense of honor so I can undestand the angst Abdul feels. What I CAN say however is that it has become most evident that I waited 'too long' to attempt to find a special unattached someone and it would anguish me forever Abdul, if you were to follow in my footsteps. It is not my place to say or suggest or advise perhaps but let me tell you my "experience' has been a forelorn teacher of such matters of the heart. However, even I had an option and I have chosen it as while honor on both her and my part will keep us physically apart the compassion and adoration which exists between us will certainly suffice for me as I no longer have heart, patience, nor time left for such adventures of risk. But you Abdul, still have time, but perhaps less than you believe as it goes by, OHHH, so very quick. I myself used to say; "Well, in three months or six months or whatever I shall do so and so. That time went by and far more in the blink of an eye. To say my 'option' is second best is absolutly not true however for she is the one I would have chosen if we were single when we met. Thus I have no heartache with my choice and if others fault me for such I assure you she nor God does or shall.
and thus I say to you, be honest with yourself and your woman, be simple and go slow....but DAMNIT Abdul, do GO!!!!! Okay? I beg of thee.
God will forgive old sinners, he does not forgive old fools. For whatever reason he afforded me an excellent option and to not take it would make me such a fool.
I say all of this only because I love you as a brother.
Go with God AND with your heart as time, even now passes you by.
peace and love to you and yours
JD
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My brother who I love...
Look at Sahabah's poem
just put by her
my response in tome
says what I infer.
You are totally correct
in all you say
my methedology to protect
is an Eastern way.
Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari
PS: Janet is like get laid already and I respect her integrity however it has to be done appropriately. Yes. -
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Janet...
OH MY OH MY OH MY....
I Looooooooooooooooove YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!
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May God forgive me...
Angels conspire against me
and I am theirs
no longer heart free
surrendering my soul's affairs.
I fight my breath
that holds the moment
safe until my death
I exhale her rent.
Oh, I'm crazy, gone
as your write says
like rock blasting songs
and still I pray.
God, forgive me please
love tortures my soul.
Please give me ease
though I've lost control.
I put You first
and then my heart
yet within this verse
I have fallen apart.
Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari
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